2nd Revision of Marketing presentation

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Luis:

Made the changes you requested. Let me know if I need to change or reword anything for you.

Thanks,
Chloe

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Here is a finished presentation Sat Jul 09, 2011 5:24 am by **luie1177**

Re: 2nd Revision of Marketing presentation Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:58 am by cmanlarry

Luis,
There are some grammar errors and at the very beginning you need to show the connection between the business name and your acronym GFPM so that people will not get confused.

Re: 2nd Revision of Marketing presentation Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:32 am by cmanlarry

Luis,
Slide # 9 first sentence should have the word "is" instead of "are"
Slide #5 third bullet should tie GFPM to the company name in full just one time.

Great presentation and I will be interested in how it is received to new customers. Please keep us posted.

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